This is wonderful, Glenn. If you are trying to decide between the two then I prefer this one because of the stronger leading line of the water on the bottom. As a thumbnail the brighter green and yellow leaves along the left side are mildly distracting, so maybe just a bit darker for them and you've got it!
Deidre Elzer-Lento
- Saturday 9 May 2020 12:53
I too like this composition better than the first. I like the size of the upper waterfall better. The bright green on the left side near the middle of the frame is distracting. I believe it needs to be toned down. I don't mind the yellow leaves. Nice image
Mike Lang
- Sunday 10 May 2020 14:15
This has a nice flow to it and symmetry with the two falls. The foreground water color adds a nice detail missing from the first. I also agree, I would burn in the lighter leaves on the left side.
Glenn
- Tuesday 12 May 2020 07:32
Thanks everyone. Point well taken on taming the bright leaves just to the upper left of the lower falls. I did already bring them down in my initial edit but I agree they still need to be toned down a bit more. Thanks for taking the time to leave your thoughts. Without this participation these gallery projects become less effective in their intended goals. Everyone needs to understand that participation is not a one way street.
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